Adventures are the pits

I can feel the sweat dripping off my face, like rain pouring down. My face is as red and bright as flames from a fire it lit up like Christmas lights. I was so that I felt I am going to be sick I started to lose my grip. My hands were burning up it was as hot as molten iron no I want to go home. I tried to get out but I slid down the terrifying slide. It was going as fast as a car going full speed, help!! No no no I screamed I fell through the pit of balls onto another mountain of balls this place is weird.. I could feel something on my face it was a sticky lollipop, I ripped it off of my face like a sticky plaster.

There was a light shining from above that's my way out. I climbed up and up my foot slipped I was Petrified but nothing was going to stop me unless I want to be stuck in here for ever. My arms started to get tired so I stopped for a for a deep breath my throat started to clog and my head was pouncing to side to side.

I looked down and gasped for air it was long way down and it was very deep. I need to keep going then I hear a familiar voice coming from the light. It was my mum and dad said “Ben are you in here”

“yes I am in here mum I am in the ball pit but I was to far down,” they couldn’t hear me I don’t think that he is in here but we have checked everywhere.

“Let's have another look what if we can’t find him” “we well” “how do you know that” “he know that we well worry so he wouldn't have gone far” yeah you're right ok let's go have a look for him he has to be somewhere but where. I need to get to the top now then I looked up and I saw a sticky plaster it started to full it fell on face get it off I let go of the balls and nearly fell down.

I grabbed hold of something it was a lollipop I pulled it out of the balls and put it in like someone who is digging for treasure and started to climbed and climbed until I reached the top I managed to overcome my worse nightmare and i still had the lolly pop in my hand so I put it in my mouth and through the balls in the air mum and dad come back in and said Ben where have you been.

“I have been in here the whole time,”

“we came in here before and you weren’t in here” anyway it is time to go home” ok mum can we come here tomorrow we’ll see ok. Now I don't have to be scared of the ball pit again.

The End . 

we had watched a video then we had to describe it in the character side view