Animals vs Demons

Pigeon impossible

Pigeon impossible

It was a breathtaking day in Washington D.C and we have fond some breaking news and a person called Walter Beckett he was crossing the road to his car. He was going fast like there was nothing in his way. He was on his way to his house when his phone rang for a important mission and fled from sight. He was on his way to the the airport when he got there he looked around and jumped of his car. He got someone to take his car to his house and put his keys in a save where no one could take them.

He was going on the most deadly mission of all time in the middle of an abandoned city the mission is to examine a chafing beast without being killed and to stop it from finding a way to come to our home and disrobing it oh and we have to look out for that stupid pigeon. It was wet and cold the ground was slushy it was once a beautiful city filled with flowers and buildings until the big earthquake tumbled over the city and the tsunami flow over it. He went into a building and went on the second story and throw a rock it hit a metal boxs He heard a sound. It was more of a roar so he run down stairs and ran out of the building. He looked around to see if anything looked different or out of shape he turned around and saw some kind of beast with scars all over it body.

The beast could camouflage he very slowly and carefully walked backwards and looked at the building that he was just in. He put his hand in his pocket and pulled something out of it. It was a piece of meat so then Walter started running towards a cave with a ginormous rock beside it. He just keep running and running and running with the piece of meat in his hand. He shock it in the air He was planning on throwing the piece of meat in the cave and the beast would go in there after the piece of meat.

He would push the rock with all his strength that way the beast would be trapped. He looked behind him and then a pigeon came along and stole the piece of meat out of his hand. The beast looked angry walter was in big trouble.So he stood in front of a cave concrete wall the beast started running straight towards him. When the beast got close to him he rolled out of the way and the beast run into the wall and it had a blackout. So Walter got out his special pen it wasn’t actually a pen. When you click it it turns into an important briefcase with lots of important information. So walter examined the beast and left the city before the beast could wake up. But the thing is the cheeky chubby pigeon didn’t even like the meat he just didn’t like Walter

W.A.L.T Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors. Write in correct sentences. Use paragraphs correctly Use adjectives Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

20 things you should say more often

as a class we watched a video of a kid telling us 20 things we should say,  this is my 20 things 

The mountain bike

The mountain bike

One outstanding morning in scotland I was on my way to Isle of Skye. The bight golden sun shone and the water sparkled. The flower blowed the grass grow the beautiful blue water came storming down the water full. It was breathtaking there was hardly any clouds in the sparkly sky. the mountains were covered in snow the ice looks like glitter. Hi my name is Danny as I was paddling to the mountains with my bike in the bout. It was a small bout but it didn’t matter not to me. I could feel the nice cold breeze blowing through my here.

As I finally reached the shore I leaped out of the side bout. I put each hand on the handlebars of the bike and gently lifted the bike out of the bout. The sun looked like crispy golden chips as I walked my bike on the slushy saned. I got on my bike and started to ride my bike up the hell it was beautiful the air was fresh the rocks on the mountain were like blades.  

I was terrified it was my dream to go up on the mountain and ride my bike on the mountain. This is a once and a lifetime experiences this is my opportunity be famers. I could never turn this down it is not every day something like this came it is so peaceful. It was like I was on a magic island I can feel the fresh air blowing the opposite way than me. The wind was strong and wild It was like I was on a roller coaster going down hell as the freezing cold water splashes you in the face and when the adrenaline runs up and down your body. As your head hits the set and flies ford like an aeroplane crashing and hit the ground like an earthquake it was such a bumpy ride

As I flipped over the the fence I started To climb my way up the mountain It was high and steep hell I know that if I fell I would died but I wasn’t  worried about it at the moment. all I ceared about is completing my goal.

Life as a dog

Life as a dog

One hot day the sun was shining. It looked like melted gold was going to burst out. The grass was light green and on a paddo lid a light wooden table with a cupcake on a large white plate it was a banana cupcake. It had chocolate flavored icing with chocolate chips on top of it.

Around the paddo was a kris kros fence . That is when I saw my owner on her phone. She had a light pink phone case it aso had bright red love hearts on it. She had blond hair with stroke of pink in it she was biting her bottom lip you could hear the crackles in her voice.

I have never heard her like that. Then she started shaking her head as she opened her mouth and mumbled out ok. She carefully lied her phone on the table and put her hands in her here then she ran inside. I turned my head and in the corner of my eye I saw the delicious looking cupcake .

I know I would get in trouble if I eat it but it didn’t seem to matter. It was like I was the only one around I could smell the chocolate icing from a mile away. The chocolate chips were going to melt the cupcake looked moist and fresh. “Just a bit” I said to myself as I lick my lips.

I leaped into the air my light soft pores sled on the wet slushy ground. It was as slippery as an ice skating rink. I finally caught my grep with my nails then I managed to slide to the paddo. I started to feel sick to my stomach is this what feeling Nervous feels like. Any minute my owner could come out so if I was going to eat it I would have to make it quick and quiet.

I know it’s wrong but it just looks so delicious. I couldn’t resist as my my stomach was growling of hanger. Then my strawberry pink though liced my lips. I started to grebbell I couldn’t help it it was just so breathtaking I could just imagine the texture then my owner come back out luckily I got away before she saw me.        

     

Persistent Pigeons

One stunning morning, the sun shone brighter then anything and on top of a building lad a nest with three chubby pigeons. Hi I am Scarlet, me and my two sisters called Kate and Emmaley were laying in our nest. I like to think that I am the smartest out of us. As me and my siblings  were chirping I saw in the corner of my eye a cupcake with lemon flavor icing.

It looked delicious and fresh like it had just been made. So carefully I hopped out of the nest. Then I said to my sister “hey do you want to help me get that cupcake.” Kate hopped out of the nest Emmaly looked at us like she was scared. I told her that it would be ok. Outcome Emmaly but it was out of reach so we stood on each others shoulder it was fun but at the some time it was freaky.

Then we all fell down it was so frustrating. Then Kate came up with an idea the idea was to put a scrunched up ball and put a piece of cardboard on top. Kate jumped on it but it was to light so Emmaly jumped on it to. I went flying but I just zoomed past it so we all just went back to the nest. One hour later we saw our mum we talked her about the cupcake but she just gave us a worm.

The End    

Alma

Alma

It was a snowy day in a small town with lots of old wooden cabins. I could hear the sound of the snow under my feet. My foot went deeper and deeper into the icy shine reflective snow. Each step I took it felt like I was sinking into the snow. Hi my name is Alma, I am a 10 year old girl with light fluffy blond here.

I was on my way homes from school. I was leaping through the air on to the snow as I was jumping I felt something hard under me. I thought it was barck . I hopped off of it that is when I realized that it was a piece of chalk.

I bent down and reached for the ice cold piece of chalk. Once I picked up the pieces of chalk my hands felt like they were going to fall off because they were so cold. I turned around ‘there was a chalk board that wasn’t there before’ I said to myself. On the chalkboard there were people had writ there name, so I writ my name down to.

Then in a store I saw a doll it looked exactly like me it was so basar. I tried to open the door but it was locked. I got so frustrated so I picked up some snow and throw it at the door. The door magically open so I went inside I looked for the doll.

It was right in front of me on top of a piano but I bumped into a doll it was regling on the ground so I held it and put it back down and it keeped banging into the door I turned around the doll was gone but when I found it  I want to hold it but when I touch it I turned into the doll. Help!!!. The End

Adventures are the pits

I can feel the sweat dripping off my face, like rain pouring down. My face is as red and bright as flames from a fire it lit up like Christmas lights. I was so that I felt I am going to be sick I started to lose my grip. My hands were burning up it was as hot as molten iron no I want to go home. I tried to get out but I slid down the terrifying slide. It was going as fast as a car going full speed, help!! No no no I screamed I fell through the pit of balls onto another mountain of balls this place is weird.. I could feel something on my face it was a sticky lollipop, I ripped it off of my face like a sticky plaster.

There was a light shining from above that's my way out. I climbed up and up my foot slipped I was Petrified but nothing was going to stop me unless I want to be stuck in here for ever. My arms started to get tired so I stopped for a for a deep breath my throat started to clog and my head was pouncing to side to side.

I looked down and gasped for air it was long way down and it was very deep. I need to keep going then I hear a familiar voice coming from the light. It was my mum and dad said “Ben are you in here”

“yes I am in here mum I am in the ball pit but I was to far down,” they couldn’t hear me I don’t think that he is in here but we have checked everywhere.

“Let's have another look what if we can’t find him” “we well” “how do you know that” “he know that we well worry so he wouldn't have gone far” yeah you're right ok let's go have a look for him he has to be somewhere but where. I need to get to the top now then I looked up and I saw a sticky plaster it started to full it fell on face get it off I let go of the balls and nearly fell down.

I grabbed hold of something it was a lollipop I pulled it out of the balls and put it in like someone who is digging for treasure and started to climbed and climbed until I reached the top I managed to overcome my worse nightmare and i still had the lolly pop in my hand so I put it in my mouth and through the balls in the air mum and dad come back in and said Ben where have you been.

“I have been in here the whole time,”

“we came in here before and you weren’t in here” anyway it is time to go home” ok mum can we come here tomorrow we’ll see ok. Now I don't have to be scared of the ball pit again.

The End . 

we had watched a video then we had to describe it in the character side view

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the brave space chimp

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