scare if you dear
It was a dark cold night the stars shone bright and I was spending the night at my nana's house. My nana's name was Scarlet she was a very cracker woman. Hi my name is Taler and I am a six year old girl It looked like a horror movie had been filmed here the house was really plan. It looked like the house in my nightmare there is something about it that makes servers go down my spine. It really it feel more like electric waves. As I stood there and sterd at the house I heard my mum say come on but I was speechless.
My mum looked at me and said are you coming as I managed to mabell out “do I have to stay here”. “Yes I have already told her you were coming” I said ”I am sick” no!. Each step I took I became more anchist. I wouldn’t move a masel so my mum put her cold pale hands on my shoulders pushed me into the house. I was still scared about the time I came here last. it was perching I bet you would like to know what happened here it goes I was on my way in the car to nanas house it is a very long wet drive.
It was so exciting to go to my nanas but that day it was all going to changed. As I was going up the stairs into the spare room I saw a door that said do not enter. That just made me want to go in there more I asked nana what is in that room but all she said is “it is just some bits and pieces”. It was driving me crazy I could think of what was in there It was on my mind all the time.
I really want to sneak into the room but she always had it locked and she was always watching it. She would hardly take one eye off of it she was like me with the tv. I know something was up she was acting like there was a poppall of gold in there. I was creating to know what was in there I couldn't hold it any more. Then nana was in bed I tip toed into the hallway and trend the ice cold door handle. It looks like server gold I opened the door it was flock of birds in cages.
some how one got out it tried to attack me that was when my life flashed before my eyes. My throat started to dried up I felt like screaming but then nana would know I was in here. This was a matter of life or death I had to get out but I was all the way across the room. The birds went crazy the cages started to full I wanted to run but I had froze. If I did not get out of there now. I would not be alive here now I started to breath healey.
Soon I would not breath at all I could not fight it I was frozen and I couldn’t do anything about it. I could hardly speak I felt like the room was getting smaller and smaller each minute. I was too young to diy I had my whole life ahead of me. I should have listened to nana this was my fault. If I don't die this would be on my conscious all the time how could I carry such a burden. Gelt would be on my mind forever then I realized an opened window. The moon reflecting on it so I started climb up the wall and out the window.
I love your writing Addyson I love that you put punctuation in your writing
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