I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I really like your moon DLO Addyson and I love the facts you put in the DLO. I think you should make your writing a little bigger and I don't think you need to do anything else.
Hi Addyson, I like your moon DLO. Its really good. Your facts was interesting and the picture was nice together with the facts Nice work. Anyway keep it up.
Comments Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
I really like your moon DLO Addyson and I love the facts you put in the DLO. I think you should make your writing a little bigger and I don't think you need to do anything else.
ReplyDeleteHi Addyson,
ReplyDeleteI like your moon DLO. Its really good. Your facts was interesting and the picture was nice together with the facts Nice work. Anyway keep it up.