On the 26th of September it was the year 7, 8, 9 & 10's market day.
My company was rainbow cupcakes our first batch didn't work out instead they went hard.
The second batch work out really well but they weren't as big as we wanted. We only got eleven so we did a sausage sizzle but we tried our beast.
My favourite part about market day was being with my team, working together and seeing ever ones happy face.
I like giving the sausages to people and hearing them saying thank you.
If I did it again I would make a different creation
Hello Addyson!
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you had a great time at Market Day and that your customers at the sausage sizzle were using great manners by saying please and thank you!
A suggestion would be to proofread your work. There are a few small spelling errors which are changing the meaning of your sentences. For example, where you explain about how your batch of cupcakes turned out. Have another read and see if you can catch the mistake I'm talking about.
Great work today and thank you for getting your blogpost up!
- Miss Birtch
Hey Addyson I'm sorry to hear that your first batch turned out hard. Did you leave them cooking for too long? It's great that you have reflected on this and that you have this experience for next year's Market Day. I'm glad that you still had a great day selling sausages.
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