For English we have been writing a essay. About whatever we want and we had a few option of how we do it. such as writing about a scene of and movie or TV show which is how i did my essay. I decided to do it about my favourite show Teen wolf. We had to display the Freytag's pyramid / structure of writing.
Here is my essay
Full moon soon to appear, Stiles runs through the old wooden door using his freshly cut key, Scott’s mum Melissa instantly reacts, turning to the door whilst getting ready for her work shift at the hospital, wearing pale blue T-shirt & pants with a stethoscope placed around her neck. She stops in the doorway waiting for who she believes is her son to walk into the house, with a look of confusion she realises instead of her son it’s his best friend's stiles, A Goofy, sarcastic. Teenage boy who always happens to get in trouble
“What are you doing here Stiles? She says while knowing this is something he would do. “I had a key cut” A look of concern struck upon Melissa’s face. “Of course you did,” she replied in hast. Or though the concerned look seemed to be targeted elsewhere. She had grown concerned about her son for now that he is a werewolf he had become edgy and sent off a strange mood towards others whilst keeping his secret and trying to balance that with his normal teenage life.
Out of curiosity and concern she asks without hesitance if Scott was alright As he doesn’t talk to her like he used to and hides himself away. Stiles blames it on the recent breakup Scott went through With Alison. Knowing damn well his troubles run much deeper than that, he couldn't tell her this & once again he is to lie. With each lie there’s bound to be the unravelling of each lie told. Just as Scott's lies were his downfall, he couldn’t keep up & was being dragged down each lie he fulls deeper & deeper to lose everything. At this time they both thought that Scott wasn’t home. Styles runs up the wooden stained stairs and barges into Scott's pitch black room. He finds the light switch and quickly turns it on to see Scott sitting on his bed, Still as a statue.
Scott & Stiles had planned to have Scott chained up on the night of the full moon, Scott refuses to cooperate. Stiles dumps a bag on the floor next to a wall heater and asks Scott to at least take a look. He gets off his bed and transitions on his floor next to the bag, He buries his hands in the bag and pulls out chains. You could see the disgust in his eyes.“ Do you actually think I’d let you use these?” Stiles looked into scotts eyes like he had expected this. With a quick Reply Stiles says “ No actually I don’t.
Stiles grabs his wrist slaps on a handcuff connecting the other side to the heater keeping him trapped. Scott rages and starts squirming and tugging at his wrist trying to get free. With the window right above him and the moon slowly making an appearance he tugs as hard as he could. Stiles intentions were to keep people including Scott & himself safe but also to get revenge on Scott for making out with the girl he has a huge crush on. He tells Scott this and Scott takes it as a chance to agitate Stiles by describing how she kissed him first and how she wanted him.
The full moon finally arrives and Scott goes berserk, Raging & screaming uncontrollable. The pain in his voice makes Stiles anxious. His strength kicks in & his tugs even harder on the cuffs. By now blood was drawn, He looked even more comfortable with each second
Blood on the floor dripping from his wrist, Red marks & bruises all around his wrist & hand. He eventually gets free, Stiles gets concerned by the silence and calls out to Scott a few times all with no response as the concern grows, Stiles instantly barges into the room once again. Left to see the blood left on the floor and the broken cuffs still attached to the heater just above he looks at the window that is now open wide & wind causing the curtains to fly around like wings of a bird.
Scott Had jumped out the window & now was running on all fours Through mud & grass. A car was in his site so without thinking it through or thinking at all he jumped on to it hands hit the roof followed by his muddy Shoes. Ironically he had come to find Alison sitting in the car with Jackson who had threatened to tell Scott's secret and ruin all chance of him getting back together with Alison unless he gets the alpha to bite Jackson and turn him into a werewolf. In the car they are just talking in Scott's wolf vision he sees them making out with their hands all over each other.
Scott jumps down from the previous car and onto the one Allison & Jackson are in. She goes to open the door before She could open it Jackson pulls her arm away. A figure swings in unexpectedly throwing Scott to the ground. Scott gets up to get a glimpse of the one who had interrupted him. The figure moves into the low bit of light there is. Scott looks shocked. He thought Derek was dead but now he was standing right in front of him. He shot up and instantly started to fight.
Derek's eyes glowed bright blue unlike Scott's which glowed yellow. Fangs grew from his gums. He threw Scott against a tree and roared loud, deep & fiercely. Scott then became human again and could control himself, Derek helped Scott up & took him home where Scott asked if there was a way he could be human and not the monster he believes he has become. Derek looks down then back at Scott “ I’ve heard there may be a way I don’t know if it’s true, I heard if you kill the one who bit you it reverses it. Scott..., if you help me hunt him down I will help you kill him”. The long night was over & in that moment there was hope for Scott, Things were finally looking up.
