I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Great work Addyson. I like how you posted a picture of you playing soccer. Next time put some information about where you are and the other things you did there.
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Great work Addyson. I like how you posted a picture of you playing soccer. Next time put some information about where you are and the other things you did there.
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