My DLO about hot place

 
are group read a book called hot place and it gives you information about stars W.A.L.T: I am learning to read and find the appropriate information I am looking for

Pigeon impossible

Pigeon impossible

It was a breathtaking day in Washington D.C and we have fond some breaking news and a person called Walter Beckett he was crossing the road to his car. He was going fast like there was nothing in his way. He was on his way to his house when his phone rang for a important mission and fled from sight. He was on his way to the the airport when he got there he looked around and jumped of his car. He got someone to take his car to his house and put his keys in a save where no one could take them.

He was going on the most deadly mission of all time in the middle of an abandoned city the mission is to examine a chafing beast without being killed and to stop it from finding a way to come to our home and disrobing it oh and we have to look out for that stupid pigeon. It was wet and cold the ground was slushy it was once a beautiful city filled with flowers and buildings until the big earthquake tumbled over the city and the tsunami flow over it. He went into a building and went on the second story and throw a rock it hit a metal boxs He heard a sound. It was more of a roar so he run down stairs and ran out of the building. He looked around to see if anything looked different or out of shape he turned around and saw some kind of beast with scars all over it body.

The beast could camouflage he very slowly and carefully walked backwards and looked at the building that he was just in. He put his hand in his pocket and pulled something out of it. It was a piece of meat so then Walter started running towards a cave with a ginormous rock beside it. He just keep running and running and running with the piece of meat in his hand. He shock it in the air He was planning on throwing the piece of meat in the cave and the beast would go in there after the piece of meat.

He would push the rock with all his strength that way the beast would be trapped. He looked behind him and then a pigeon came along and stole the piece of meat out of his hand. The beast looked angry walter was in big trouble.So he stood in front of a cave concrete wall the beast started running straight towards him. When the beast got close to him he rolled out of the way and the beast run into the wall and it had a blackout. So Walter got out his special pen it wasn’t actually a pen. When you click it it turns into an important briefcase with lots of important information. So walter examined the beast and left the city before the beast could wake up. But the thing is the cheeky chubby pigeon didn’t even like the meat he just didn’t like Walter

W.A.L.T Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors. Write in correct sentences. Use paragraphs correctly Use adjectives Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

My DLO

20 things you should say more often

as a class we watched a video of a kid telling us 20 things we should say,  this is my 20 things 

The Moon

The mountain bike

The mountain bike

One outstanding morning in scotland I was on my way to Isle of Skye. The bight golden sun shone and the water sparkled. The flower blowed the grass grow the beautiful blue water came storming down the water full. It was breathtaking there was hardly any clouds in the sparkly sky. the mountains were covered in snow the ice looks like glitter. Hi my name is Danny as I was paddling to the mountains with my bike in the bout. It was a small bout but it didn’t matter not to me. I could feel the nice cold breeze blowing through my here.

As I finally reached the shore I leaped out of the side bout. I put each hand on the handlebars of the bike and gently lifted the bike out of the bout. The sun looked like crispy golden chips as I walked my bike on the slushy saned. I got on my bike and started to ride my bike up the hell it was beautiful the air was fresh the rocks on the mountain were like blades.  

I was terrified it was my dream to go up on the mountain and ride my bike on the mountain. This is a once and a lifetime experiences this is my opportunity be famers. I could never turn this down it is not every day something like this came it is so peaceful. It was like I was on a magic island I can feel the fresh air blowing the opposite way than me. The wind was strong and wild It was like I was on a roller coaster going down hell as the freezing cold water splashes you in the face and when the adrenaline runs up and down your body. As your head hits the set and flies ford like an aeroplane crashing and hit the ground like an earthquake it was such a bumpy ride

As I flipped over the the fence I started To climb my way up the mountain It was high and steep hell I know that if I fell I would died but I wasn’t  worried about it at the moment. all I ceared about is completing my goal.

scare if you dear

scare if you dear

It was a dark cold night the stars shone bright and I was spending the night at my nana's house. My nana's name was Scarlet she was a very cracker woman. Hi my name is Taler and I am a six year old girl It looked like a horror movie had been filmed here the house was really plan. It looked like the house in my nightmare there is something about it that makes servers go down my spine. It really it feel more like electric waves. As I stood there and sterd at the house I heard my mum say come on but I was speechless.

My mum looked at me and said are you coming as I managed to mabell out “do I have to stay here”. “Yes I have already told her you were coming” I said ”I am sick” no!. Each step I took I became more anchist. I wouldn’t move a masel so my mum put her cold pale hands on my shoulders pushed me into the house. I was still scared about the time I came here last. it was perching I bet you would like to know what happened here it goes I was on my way in the car to nanas house it is a very long wet drive.

It was so exciting to go to my nanas but that day it was all going to changed. As I was going up the stairs into the spare room I saw a door that said do not enter. That just made me want to go in there more I asked nana what is in that room but all she said is “it is just some bits and pieces”. It was driving me crazy I could think of what was in there It was on my mind all the time.

I really want to sneak into the room but she always had it locked and she was always watching it. She would hardly take one eye off of it she was like me with the tv. I know something was up she was acting like there was a poppall of gold in there. I was creating to know what was in there I couldn't hold it any more. Then nana was in bed I tip toed into the hallway and trend the ice cold door handle. It looks like server gold I opened the door it was flock of birds in cages.

some how one got out it tried to attack me that was when my life flashed before my eyes. My throat started to dried up I felt like screaming but then nana would know I was in here. This was a matter of life or death I had to get out but I was all the way across the room. The birds went crazy the cages started to full I wanted to run but I had froze. If I did not get out of there now. I would not be alive here now I started to breath healey.

Soon I would not breath at all I could not fight it I was frozen and I couldn’t do anything about it. I could hardly speak I felt like the room was getting smaller and smaller each minute. I was too young to diy I had my whole life ahead of me. I should have listened to nana this was my fault. If I don't die this would be on my conscious all the time how could I carry such a burden. Gelt would be on my mind forever then I realized an opened window. The moon reflecting on it so I started climb up the wall and out the window.

Life as a dog

Life as a dog

One hot day the sun was shining. It looked like melted gold was going to burst out. The grass was light green and on a paddo lid a light wooden table with a cupcake on a large white plate it was a banana cupcake. It had chocolate flavored icing with chocolate chips on top of it.

Around the paddo was a kris kros fence . That is when I saw my owner on her phone. She had a light pink phone case it aso had bright red love hearts on it. She had blond hair with stroke of pink in it she was biting her bottom lip you could hear the crackles in her voice.

I have never heard her like that. Then she started shaking her head as she opened her mouth and mumbled out ok. She carefully lied her phone on the table and put her hands in her here then she ran inside. I turned my head and in the corner of my eye I saw the delicious looking cupcake .

I know I would get in trouble if I eat it but it didn’t seem to matter. It was like I was the only one around I could smell the chocolate icing from a mile away. The chocolate chips were going to melt the cupcake looked moist and fresh. “Just a bit” I said to myself as I lick my lips.

I leaped into the air my light soft pores sled on the wet slushy ground. It was as slippery as an ice skating rink. I finally caught my grep with my nails then I managed to slide to the paddo. I started to feel sick to my stomach is this what feeling Nervous feels like. Any minute my owner could come out so if I was going to eat it I would have to make it quick and quiet.

I know it’s wrong but it just looks so delicious. I couldn’t resist as my my stomach was growling of hanger. Then my strawberry pink though liced my lips. I started to grebbell I couldn’t help it it was just so breathtaking I could just imagine the texture then my owner come back out luckily I got away before she saw me.        

     

My DlO about the Maori life in the 1800s

My DLO about fractions

DLO

Persistent Pigeons

One stunning morning, the sun shone brighter then anything and on top of a building lad a nest with three chubby pigeons. Hi I am Scarlet, me and my two sisters called Kate and Emmaley were laying in our nest. I like to think that I am the smartest out of us. As me and my siblings  were chirping I saw in the corner of my eye a cupcake with lemon flavor icing.

It looked delicious and fresh like it had just been made. So carefully I hopped out of the nest. Then I said to my sister “hey do you want to help me get that cupcake.” Kate hopped out of the nest Emmaly looked at us like she was scared. I told her that it would be ok. Outcome Emmaly but it was out of reach so we stood on each others shoulder it was fun but at the some time it was freaky.

Then we all fell down it was so frustrating. Then Kate came up with an idea the idea was to put a scrunched up ball and put a piece of cardboard on top. Kate jumped on it but it was to light so Emmaly jumped on it to. I went flying but I just zoomed past it so we all just went back to the nest. One hour later we saw our mum we talked her about the cupcake but she just gave us a worm.

The End    

Floating m&m’s

  are class done a experiment then we had to writ about it

My snow experiment

 for topic we are making experiment  we have chosen to do a snow experiment that we are going to share with the class  

Alma

Alma

It was a snowy day in a small town with lots of old wooden cabins. I could hear the sound of the snow under my feet. My foot went deeper and deeper into the icy shine reflective snow. Each step I took it felt like I was sinking into the snow. Hi my name is Alma, I am a 10 year old girl with light fluffy blond here.

I was on my way homes from school. I was leaping through the air on to the snow as I was jumping I felt something hard under me. I thought it was barck . I hopped off of it that is when I realized that it was a piece of chalk.

I bent down and reached for the ice cold piece of chalk. Once I picked up the pieces of chalk my hands felt like they were going to fall off because they were so cold. I turned around ‘there was a chalk board that wasn’t there before’ I said to myself. On the chalkboard there were people had writ there name, so I writ my name down to.

Then in a store I saw a doll it looked exactly like me it was so basar. I tried to open the door but it was locked. I got so frustrated so I picked up some snow and throw it at the door. The door magically open so I went inside I looked for the doll.

It was right in front of me on top of a piano but I bumped into a doll it was regling on the ground so I held it and put it back down and it keeped banging into the door I turned around the doll was gone but when I found it  I want to hold it but when I touch it I turned into the doll. Help!!!. The End

The girl in the red coat

Hi my name is Olivia. I am a six year old girl with shiny blond curly here in a small cradled village with lots of small empty beret apartments. Because for tragic years ago there was a fire. It lit up so bright like a hundred torches and the fire spread and house’s got burnt to the ground. There were broken down cars from crashing in together like fire with water. My mum and dad were making as little food as have left. We have to try make it through the week.

I was out on my own it started to rain the clouds were gray it looked like burnt candy floss. I was lucky that I had my rose red coat to keep me worm . The rain started pouring down like a thunderstorm on a cold winter's day. I was about to turn around and go home but I was so far away that I didn’t remember what we I went.

It was getting colder each minute I could hardly hear anything but the sound of teeth chattering. My hands were shaking I could see the stem coming from warm breath. I dropped down on the wet solid ground the lights in my eyes went out it was pitch black. When I woke up I was next to a bright orange fire there was a woman she had a mag in her hand.

I felt so weak even weaker than I have ever felt before. I was aiming for the door then I hear a voice it was the woman's voice. She said where do you think you are going. I need to go home dinner will be ready and mum will be wired. You will freeze if it wasn't for me you would have already freezes.

As I look out the icy window the trees were covered with snow as I run to the door. I sprinted away like the ground was breaking. Suddenly I remembered what way I came and run home once I got home I gave my mum a Huge hug and told her about my journey. The End  

My DLO

This is a slideshow about what we did for topic. We put m&ms in water.

Adrift

Hi I am Scarlet and I’m a 11 year old girl I was stranded on an island that know one has heard of . As you can see I live on a light green hell that belongs on a large blue whale it was as blue as the sea and the sun was bright and glittery, It was like sparkly gold that shone so bright it was lie a million stars gather together in the night sky. the clouds looked like a bunch of bunny's playing tag. I have been on my own for at least three years my parents left me alone on this island and I haven't seen them since then I through that I had done something wrong that they didn’t want me any more .

I can barely remember what they looked like it was hard raising myself I would do anything just to hear their voices one more time. I had to supply food for myself and I stayed inside basically all day it was hard to sleep at night i was restless.

All I did was lie there awake thinking about what it would be like to have a family the thought of being tucked in at night. I had dreamed about it for years all I want is to have a friend then I would be happy then outside my window I was a bird fly pars there was something on it’s ankle. I’d tried to take it off the bird but it flow away so i ran outside.

I could smell the fresh air I could feel  it as it zoomed past in a heartbeat. All those years inside I finally know what it like to experienced the fresh air again the only thing that would make this better if I had someone to experience this with me so I sat down on the light green grass and put my head on my arms I felt as if I was going to cry.

At that moment I saw a girl flying around she looked like she was the same age as me maybe a bit older, she fell down onto the island I put my hand out she grabbed my hand then lightning struck. She flew to another island then she throw a rope that was tied to the other island.

I grabbed the rope it fell out of my hand I managed to grab hold of it again but this time I tied it to my tree after that I said” do you want to be my friend” “you want me to be your friend I have never had a friend” she said really me either.

Buster the Boxer

Buster the Boxer

It was Christmas eve we were all at home the walls were as white as snow and the backyard had sand all over it. I was watching my owner jump up and down on her bouncy bed like she was on a trampoline, I always wondered what she was doing it seemed like it was a lot of fun would I be able to do it.

Her mum came into the room and said “you need to go to sleep now you have got a big day tomorrow”.

“ok mum good night”. and she dived into her bed her sheets were yellow.

She went over to the window and dad was trying to put something together, I wondered what it was but when it was put together two foxes were jumping on it then a skunk joined along  a hedgehogs and a squirrels were jumping on the trampoline.

I wanted to jump on the trampoline with them but I was stuck inside, I couldn't bear it I almost felt like crying and barking but I didn’t so I layed down and went to sleep. When I woke up I saw my owner running to the trampoline but I fled there first. I jumped up and down it was amazing I have never been  more excited in my life I felt alive. I was too busy to realize what was going on everyone was staring at me.

Exploring Blogs

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint. We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.

Somalia

It was another day of shiping things to other countries, cooks were making food I could smell it from the boxes everyone was doing what they had to do. It was so peaceful and quiet I imagined that the captain is was watching the sun reflecting on the ocean as the waves were going past and dolphins were jumping out of the water.

You are probably wondering why I am in a box, well that is because I am a robot and my name is Tom it has been centuries since I had smelt the fresh air and stared at the ocean for hours.  

The captain is probably drinking his coffee the heat would be brushing off his shoulders. Until he hear a thump the first time he thought that it was nothing  but the second time he heard it he had to be certain that it was nothing.

So he sent someone to go a check the whole ship, but he had no idea about how much chaos was going on down there.

We were being ambushed by pirates! in the meantime the captain was at the front of the boat with no Idea what was going on he was clueless. I could sense that someone was there I saw the pirate from the holes in the box by now he could probably feel the pirates breath on the back of he neck he turned around and his hat had been taken off of his head and the pirate said “give me the key” and took his coffee out of his hand .

Give the key to me now, the pirate put his hand out the captain gave him the key then he told the captain to get out!. So that is what he done he walked out of the room ashamed. He felt furious, and petrified.

The pirate opened the shipping container me and the other robots were relieved we said loudly to the “pirates get off our ship.” One by one they jumped into the water, the captain got what had belonged him it was the keys. Then things went back to the way it was and life continued like nothing happened me and my robot friend went back into the boxes. But those intruders are still out there and they may back again.

Adventures are the pits

I can feel the sweat dripping off my face, like rain pouring down. My face is as red and bright as flames from a fire it lit up like Christmas lights. I was so that I felt I am going to be sick I started to lose my grip. My hands were burning up it was as hot as molten iron no I want to go home. I tried to get out but I slid down the terrifying slide. It was going as fast as a car going full speed, help!! No no no I screamed I fell through the pit of balls onto another mountain of balls this place is weird.. I could feel something on my face it was a sticky lollipop, I ripped it off of my face like a sticky plaster.

There was a light shining from above that's my way out. I climbed up and up my foot slipped I was Petrified but nothing was going to stop me unless I want to be stuck in here for ever. My arms started to get tired so I stopped for a for a deep breath my throat started to clog and my head was pouncing to side to side.

I looked down and gasped for air it was long way down and it was very deep. I need to keep going then I hear a familiar voice coming from the light. It was my mum and dad said “Ben are you in here”

“yes I am in here mum I am in the ball pit but I was to far down,” they couldn’t hear me I don’t think that he is in here but we have checked everywhere.

“Let's have another look what if we can’t find him” “we well” “how do you know that” “he know that we well worry so he wouldn't have gone far” yeah you're right ok let's go have a look for him he has to be somewhere but where. I need to get to the top now then I looked up and I saw a sticky plaster it started to full it fell on face get it off I let go of the balls and nearly fell down.

I grabbed hold of something it was a lollipop I pulled it out of the balls and put it in like someone who is digging for treasure and started to climbed and climbed until I reached the top I managed to overcome my worse nightmare and i still had the lolly pop in my hand so I put it in my mouth and through the balls in the air mum and dad come back in and said Ben where have you been.

“I have been in here the whole time,”

“we came in here before and you weren’t in here” anyway it is time to go home” ok mum can we come here tomorrow we’ll see ok. Now I don't have to be scared of the ball pit again.

The End . 

we had watched a video then we had to describe it in the character side view

My learning 2017

Here are my learning for this year I wanted to share my learning with I hop you like my presentation please leave a comment.

Run

                                                                       Run

I was in a dirty abandoned looking city there were leaves and trees everywhere this place used to be a city that was beautiful with flowers and  butterflies. I was happy and I had a family friends and a home but everything was destroyed now I must find out what they want from as and destroy them like they destroyed my family and my childhood.

My heart was crushed into little tiny pieces and that made me the women I am today. Life's sacralised in the hands of other people I have no memory of them I still hope that one day my family and I will be Reunited. I hear a voice inside my head saying that it is not too late to start over I yell noo it is too late.

I was standing on a building there was a  medall box I throw the old dented medall box off the roof pot of the  building it was one hundred foot drop. It did not open not one dent I walk down a bunch of stairs to get to the brick there was a box made of metal.

I knocked it open then I kneeled down, there was pictures of a family I said to myself

“Is that me with my family,” if it is it is a great photo they looked so happy together and now they are gone. Family members destroyed that is the most horrible thing to happen.

I saw a piece of glass I had a feeling that this wasn’t a normal piece of glass it turned on, I said to myself I know I was right there was a photo of a hand the hand had three long scars beside each nacelle.

Wait a minute what's the sound? that was the sound of when my family was captured this was trap they were trying to catch me off guard. I stood up I sprinted across the deserted city.

I jumped onto my black, scratched and dented motorbike.Behind the tree out came and electric robot plane. I started the motorbike up rode like the wind. There was a robots everywhere and they were trying their best to destroy me!

I kept lighting bombs and throwing them at them, but I keep missing. I went into a dark, scary tunnel. I thought I would crash until the too robots turned on their lights.I managed to find another way out of the tunnel. I was so relieved.  

I said to the big robot let’s finish wear we left off. The  big robot started to shoot bullets at me I got a  electric shock! I said to the robot “come on I am just warming up”.


For writing we have been watching video clips and writing about it battening that you are that person and that you feel what that person feels

My Learning in the Classroom

In Room 10 we have been working on cyber smart so we made a DLO about it to explain to every one about being in the right place that the right time.