My DLO about hot place

 
are group read a book called hot place and it gives you information about stars W.A.L.T: I am learning to read and find the appropriate information I am looking for

Pigeon impossible

Pigeon impossible

It was a breathtaking day in Washington D.C and we have fond some breaking news and a person called Walter Beckett he was crossing the road to his car. He was going fast like there was nothing in his way. He was on his way to his house when his phone rang for a important mission and fled from sight. He was on his way to the the airport when he got there he looked around and jumped of his car. He got someone to take his car to his house and put his keys in a save where no one could take them.

He was going on the most deadly mission of all time in the middle of an abandoned city the mission is to examine a chafing beast without being killed and to stop it from finding a way to come to our home and disrobing it oh and we have to look out for that stupid pigeon. It was wet and cold the ground was slushy it was once a beautiful city filled with flowers and buildings until the big earthquake tumbled over the city and the tsunami flow over it. He went into a building and went on the second story and throw a rock it hit a metal boxs He heard a sound. It was more of a roar so he run down stairs and ran out of the building. He looked around to see if anything looked different or out of shape he turned around and saw some kind of beast with scars all over it body.

The beast could camouflage he very slowly and carefully walked backwards and looked at the building that he was just in. He put his hand in his pocket and pulled something out of it. It was a piece of meat so then Walter started running towards a cave with a ginormous rock beside it. He just keep running and running and running with the piece of meat in his hand. He shock it in the air He was planning on throwing the piece of meat in the cave and the beast would go in there after the piece of meat.

He would push the rock with all his strength that way the beast would be trapped. He looked behind him and then a pigeon came along and stole the piece of meat out of his hand. The beast looked angry walter was in big trouble.So he stood in front of a cave concrete wall the beast started running straight towards him. When the beast got close to him he rolled out of the way and the beast run into the wall and it had a blackout. So Walter got out his special pen it wasn’t actually a pen. When you click it it turns into an important briefcase with lots of important information. So walter examined the beast and left the city before the beast could wake up. But the thing is the cheeky chubby pigeon didn’t even like the meat he just didn’t like Walter

W.A.L.T Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors. Write in correct sentences. Use paragraphs correctly Use adjectives Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.